We're into Week #5. Service has started, and the class has ventured into West Philly to meet their learners and take in some city sites, like the quirky row houses above that are so iconic around the UPenn campus. This week, our class is writing their first college English papers. Students have three potential topics to explore, and they also have an option when it comes to grading.
Alfie Kohn suggests that students develop more natural curiosity when they aren't driven to strive for grades. To explore this theory, students can opt to ditch the letter grade on their first paper in favor of comments or a private conference with me about their writing. The challenge is this: which system offers the best learning experience?
Below, you'll find the assignment, followed by a rubric that offers students the chance to weigh in about assessment.
Assignment 1: A Reader’s Response
Craft of Language, SL-2011
Draft due: Thurs., Oct. 6
Final due: Thurs., Oct. 13
Length: 1,000 words
Instructions: You have
two choices for this paper. Pick the assignment that interests you most, then
sketch out a draft. You’ll hand it in to me on October 6 for comments, then
I’ll flip it back to you so you can revise.
The purpose of this assignment: to give you practice responding to in-class readings, something you’ll
be asked to do throughout college. Feel free to use “I.” Note: this does not
have to be a thesis-driven essay.
Grading: I’ll be grading
on 4 areas – content, organization, style, and mechanics.
1. Grading: A Response Manifesto
Alfie Kohn’s essay “From Grading to De-Grading” (286-297)
argues that the American grading system is problematic. Write a 1,000-word
response essay in which you explore at least three of his points – do you agree
or disagree with them? Use personal anecdotes to back up your opinions. At the
end of your essay, suggest at least one change to the current grading system.
Be sure to quote directly from Kohn’s essay.
2. Social
Roles: I Won’t _________
Reread Catherine Newman’s article “I DO. Not. Why I Won’t
Marry” (61-66), then come up with a rite of passage that you don’t believe is
for you (joining a fraternity/sorority, having kids, buying a house, owning two
cars, joining the military, etc.) Style your 1,000-word response after
Newman’s, using “because” statements to set up each of your points. Be sure
into include a strong introduction and conclusion.
3. Reflecting on School
In Johnathan Kozol’s “Preparing Minds for Markets”
(331-343), he condemns schools for teaching kids to see themselves as workers
in a business. Explore your own experience as a student – was your mind prepared
for market or a particular career? Examine any presuppositions, terms, or
silent signals that may have fed into this educational paradigm. In your
opinion, are there any benefits to this market-driven approach?
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Please attach this rubric to your paper:
Organization
Does the paper have a
strong opening and conclusion? Does the author make clear points and support
them?
Content
Does the paper contain
specifics and examples? Is it compelling? Does the paper help a reader gain a
new understanding about this topic?
Style
Are the sentences
clear? Does the writer use interesting, well-chosen words?
Mechanics
Does the writer set up
quotations and offer pager number citations? Is this paper written in complete
sentences? Has it been proofread and checked for commas?
Finally…to GRADE or NOT TO GRADE?
____All I need to see is a letter grade.
____I want to skip the letter grade and receive detailed comments.
____Please give me a letter grade and comments.
____I would like to meet with you to go over my paper in
person.
